Feedback Response + Changes

In response to feedback from our initial cuts and our progress so far, we have decided to reshoot certain scenes to add a more comedic element, as the rough cuts from the first shoot didn't pass off enough comedy.

• Replace shots 23-27. Same scenario and location, but rather have Sam see Mara behind him and quickly open the door again so he doesn't see her, as he closes to the door to reveal Mara, she will enthusiastically start say hi etc. when he will scream and suddenly faint.
• Rerecord the voiceovers and dialogue, as Sam's voice will need to be more uplifting and less 'sentimental' and serious. Overall acting needs to be more exaggerated to enforce comedic element.
• Include a short scene of Sam pushing Mara on a set of swings, both laughing and talking, then include shot from an outsider's perspective of Sam pushing an empty swing, laughing to himself. Shot of person's reaction. This will either replace the gun scene at the end of the trailer or the walking scene 47-49.
• Shot 44 - quickly pans to Sam with his reaction.